Actual size!
As I worked, I started to feel the piece sliding downhill. I couldn't figure out what was wrong, although I knew it probably had to do with my lazy lack of thumbnailing. I considered giving up, but instead posted the WIP to the Team Awesome Facebook group for feedback. There the ever-amazing Wylie Beckert gave me some extremely helpful tips, and even did a little paintover for me. She pointed out that the composition was suffering from too much centering and empty space, and the dryad's pose needed tweaking.
I implemented her suggestions and felt hope return to my cold, cold heart. From here on the painting went pretty smoothly.
Besides Wylie, I must also give credit to Hendrick ter Brugghen, whose masterful "Flute Player" painting I shamelessly copied for the man's hand positions.
Nice.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you forged ahead with this - it turned out absurdly awesome! Love the added storytelling with the flute, like he's charmed her out of the tree, and the rendering is beautiful.
ReplyDeleteWylie - thanks so much, I'm glad the flute thing worked! This piece came out well because of your help, seriously.
DeleteThe composition is definitely stronger. Nice piece! But I have to say, I love the gesture of the guy in the original thumbnail. Gorgeous.
ReplyDeleteReally gorgeous! You've done a great job of capturing a moment in time... I think all the changes you made were definitely for the best. Good job on producing some personal work; keep it coming!
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ReplyDeletegorgeous *-*... as a fan of fantasy books this is paradise for me :3
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